Eryk-DONE

[Storm-of-Tears]

Name//

Eryk-Means Ever Powerful in Polish.

Gender//

Male

Mate//

None

Age//

3.5 years

Species//

Polar bear

Personality// MUST BE 200 WORDS

Eryk is the powerful, quite one.He is usualy the one who surprises everyone with his amazing strength and power. He is somehwat sweet but if you piss him of then you'll see his power first hand.Often he lets his anger get ahead of him, and he holds a gruge for a while.Those few people that find his good side, relise that he is gentle,sweet, and a good friend, but its all locked inside from his old past.but right now no one sees that for he lives alone.He lives alone on the cold tundra with very few other bears, jsut teh way he likes it.He is often lonely,and this doesnt help his anger.He often sits donw on the frozen ocean and looks up at the stars with his auburn eyes.He has a husky, but honey smooth voice that he rarely ever uses, for there is no one around. He often wishes he could battle someone too, just to rid of his anger.He is very calm,and when he does find someone he usualy either scares them away, or they think he is wierd for he often talks with wise words.He always knows how to give advice, for thats what he is best at.He is very tough and strong,and he loves to show that side when he has too.He is one who treats you teh way you treat him,but if your rude he is ruder.If you are mean he is meaner.He never lets emotions build up inside him,and ever since leaving behind his fake love and his old best friend he has closed out the world around him,and he is very mean. He often thinks you must resolve things with fighting,and he challenges almost every male he meets for he always ALWAYS has hatred burning in his core.But deeper down you'll find his true personality,sweetness, gentleness,and love is trying to be free but its jsut bieng pushed back.He need something, or someone to help with this..but as said.He lives in an abandoned frozen wasteland.

Appearance// MUST BE 200 WORDS

Eryk is a very large polar bear, for he is, the largest type of bear in the world.He wieghs in at 1,300 lbs.,and he is 6.5 feet in length.He is about 57 in in hieght and he is very large.He has a somewhat long face,that ends with a round black nose.He has stocky, musculer legs that are great for swimming and running.In contrast to his body he has oddly small ears,and a small stubby tail.His paws are 12 in. across.His paws have small bumbs that help with traction on the ice.His black claws are short and stocky.He has about 42 cream colored teeth, that have a somewhat red tint from his prey.Eryk has an extremely well developed sense of smell, being able to detect seals nearly 1 mi (1.6 km) away and buried under 3 ft (0.9 m) of snow. His hearing is about as acute as that of a human, and its vision is also good at long distances. Eryk can swim 6 mph. When walking, the he tends to have a lumbering gait and maintains an average speed of around 3.5 mph while walking. When sprinting, he can reach up to 25 mph.In conclusion Eryk is a large, powerful, strong male polar bear.His snow white pelt helps him blend in with the snow, though it does have a tinge of yellow indicating his age, on his flank there is a dark black paw print that is the size of his paw.It has a diameter of 12 in. His eyes are a soft auburn color and seem to just melt someones frozen heart.

History// MUST BE 250 WORDS

Eryk was born with his brother, Tuhji. They lived with thier mother, Nuhursa, in an ice cave for about 5 months.One day she let the two brothers out to see teh world for the first time.When he opened his auburn eyes he saw a vast landscape of whiteness. He climbed out slowly, but fell back in for he was, suprisingly, the runt of the two. He got up and bounded out and sunk into the soft feathery snow immediatly.he grew up and when he was aboput 9 months old his mother was killed by a killer whale,and his brother was taken by another male and killed a few months later.He was left on his own, wandering the ice.He met another male a few months later,his name was Scrade and they isntantly became friends.They both traveled together until Scrade chose to leave and find a mate.Eryk was left alone to wander once again..

This went on for three years, until he met Kaila. She was a pretty young thing,about 2 months oyunger than her, and she captivated him. She interested him, unlike the other few females he had come across. Her coat was white and fiery, just like her spirit. It was a love that was never meant to be, the rebel and the soldier.Eryk fell for her hard and when things got serious she gave him an ultimatum. He had never turned against his family in his life but now with her he had a new family, growing inside her womb. If they had children here he knew what would happen, many of them would die just like all the others. It was a rare case when an entire litter was worthy enough to live. So he left with her, traveling across the ice and away from thier homeland and keeping far away from their old lives.

He traveled with her until she birthed their pups and he watched them grow up proudly. He loved his children and he loved Kaila more than anything. When the pups were three months old an old friend from his past showed up at the den, searching for Kaila. It was Scrade. Eryk was confused as to why he'd been looking for her and he explained that he and Kaila had been mates around the time they'd left and that he wanted her back. He'd been looking for her the entire time. Eryk couldn't breath, he couldn't think and he blindly attacked his Scrade in rage. Kaila had played them both and now he learned that those pups might not even be his! He'd risked everything for her, he'd thrown away everything and for what? A lie!

He almost killed his friend but Kaila stopped him. He demanded to know why but she didn't have a reason. She told him she'd been thinking of going home, returning to him and Eryk was so stunned he simply... shut down. She started apologizing, begging him to stay too. She wanted the three of them together! He didn't say anything more, he just walked away.Ever since then he'd closed everyone out by any means necessary. He'd toy with others the way he'd been toyed with but never would he allow true feelings to grow. Somehow he ended up in the empty wasteland and he's been drifting by just the same

[Raven]

Amazing job Storm, you meet all the word requirements. There were a couple words that were misspelled but hey your human and make mistakes. I suggest using spell check and also you forget a period at the end of your last sentences in history. Other than that amazing.

Accepted (: